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Thursday, 26 July 2012

Listen Beautiful.......





What's in a pair of rosy lips, what's in a mesmeric voice
What's in the softness of hands that guides my choice
What's in a satin skin on which my fingers slide
What matters is how long we stick to each other's side;


What's a personification of such splendour
If that comes without a benevolent tenor.
What if, for all eyes you are the cynosure,
But for no one you wait at the door


They may call you gorgeous and offer you riches
They may sigh when you glance and ignore your glitches
What's in so much adulation and maddening cheers
If when you cry there's no one to catch your tears


What's in a lovely pair of eyes, what's in the beauty
What's in long braided hair and an angelic deity
All that matters my lady and all you must care,
Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair







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54 comments:

  1. Jayashree Srivatsan26 July 2012 at 00:54

    Beauty is Skin Deep expressed so beautifully Anupam....Lovely!

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  2. Ranita Sinha26 July 2012 at 01:03

    inner beauty is true beauty..beautifully penned..

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  3. Unknown26 July 2012 at 01:04

    Clap..! Clap..! Clap..! Well said and well rhymed.
    Also, beauty lies in the eye of the beholder :)

    PS: You a lawyer?
    You present your case like a pro.

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    1. Vaishali Jain26 July 2012 at 01:38

      I second you, Ghazala! :) Anupam, the message is clear and true. Beautifully written! :)

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    2. Anupam Patra26 July 2012 at 01:50

      @ Ghazala Thanks for your kind appreciation. I'm not a lawyer. In the legal field though.
      Quite an observation, I must say.

      @ Vaishali Thanks for your encouragement.

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  4. Amrit Sinha26 July 2012 at 02:22

    Lovely poem ... really beautiful !!!

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  5. Unknown26 July 2012 at 05:53

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  6. sudha...a touch of madness26 July 2012 at 05:55

    Meaningful...and beautifully penned.

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  7. gunjan kumar26 July 2012 at 06:12

    A must read for everyone.Beauty is skin deep.Beautiful.

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  8. Ritika Tiwari26 July 2012 at 08:01

    All that matters my lady and all you must care,
    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair

    So true !

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  9. Sohini26 July 2012 at 10:31

    great one! enjoyed :D

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  10. Anonymous27 July 2012 at 04:34

    Lovely poem! Like the satin soothes the soul :)
    Here is a poetry competition, if you blv in such things, do participate:http://roughebook.blogspot.in/2012/07/rayaprol-poetry-contest.html

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  11. Panchali27 July 2012 at 14:23

    The overall tone is elegant--so beautifully depicted!The last two lines say it all...beautiful:)

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  12. D.Nambiar27 July 2012 at 17:34

    Beautifully put together, Anupam.

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  13. umashankar27 July 2012 at 20:26

    So many questions symbolic and real answered in the last two lines irrevocably!

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    1. Anupam Patra27 July 2012 at 20:28

      That's right Umashankar ji. Thanks for your kind words & continued encouragement.

      Delighted !!!

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  14. provoqd27 July 2012 at 22:18

    Ahh, the perfect description of the perfect partner Anupam. Nicely articulated :)
    Have you been able to find such a person with similar characteristics? :)

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    1. Anupam Patra28 July 2012 at 01:03

      Time will tell bro, time will tel. Fingers crossed though.

      Thanks for reading

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  15. Medha27 July 2012 at 23:38

    Excellent take on vanity!

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  16. Unknown28 July 2012 at 01:00

    Beautifully written ! You have been tagged for an Liebster Award - check the link http://www.vaishu-soulcurry.blogspot.in/2012/07/my-first-blog-award.html

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  17. Menaka Bharathi28 July 2012 at 08:34

    Anupam, I really admire the way you put things straight from heart to pen...really great reading stuff...

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    1. Anupam Patra28 July 2012 at 09:33

      Thanks a ton Menaka for your kind words of appreciation

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  18. Arpana28 July 2012 at 09:09

    WELL VERSED AND MESSAGED!

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  19. TTT28 July 2012 at 20:30

    true beauty comes from within ... loved the poem ...so b'fully expressed !

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  20. Anonymous28 July 2012 at 22:27

    excellent post, Anupam. glad i stopped by!!!

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  21. Found In Folsom29 July 2012 at 08:37

    Every word is true...liked it..beautifully expressed.

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  22. Unknown29 July 2012 at 10:15

    elegance and beauty dripping from the poem. great work.

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    1. Anupam Patra29 July 2012 at 20:43

      Thanks for your kind appreciation, Harshal

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  23. Sonia29 July 2012 at 22:50

    Beautiful :)
    Loved reading..

    All that matters my lady and all you must care,
    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair

    Really really glad to read these words by a guy :) awesome!

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    1. Anupam Patra29 July 2012 at 22:58

      Thanks Sonia for dropping by and encouraging me with your kind words of admiration.

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  24. Satish Chandra Satyarthi30 July 2012 at 23:41

    Nice poem, Anupam...
    Keep writing!

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  25. Beauty Traveller31 July 2012 at 05:11

    Such a lovely poem...its so deep and adorable. Amazing piece of work! Really nice!

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    1. Anupam Patra31 July 2012 at 06:18

      Thanks Neeraj for showering your kind words.

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  26. Unknown2 August 2012 at 22:25

    beautifully written.really nice!!

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  27. Jagriti Gulati10 August 2012 at 11:31

    What's in so much adulation and maddening cheers
    If when you cry there's no one to catch your tears


    ll that matters my lady and all you must care,
    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair


    AWESOME
    and
    TRUE
    :)

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    1. Anupam Patra22 August 2012 at 19:54

      Thanks Jagriti.It's good to see that, what I wrote for women is appreciated by them. Thanks for your support.

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  28. Markand Dave22 August 2012 at 09:03

    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair.

    Very Nice sirji.

    Markand Dave.

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