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Thursday, 11 October 2012

Committed...







Entwined by fate
together by choice
they seek bliss
in million miseries
_ wrote this on
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60 comments:

  1. Shalini Umrao11 October 2012 at 05:19

    Beautiful :)

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  2. Unknown11 October 2012 at 05:28

    serene....nice thought..

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    1. Anupam Patra11 October 2012 at 07:56

      Thank You Jasmin for your continued encouragement

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  3. Akanksha11 October 2012 at 06:51

    Lots of sentiments in just a few words….Amazing piece :)

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    1. Anupam Patra11 October 2012 at 07:57

      Thanks Akanksha. Your appreciation delighted me

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  4. Pushkar Tyagi11 October 2012 at 08:55

    Powerful lines!

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  5. Amrit Sinha11 October 2012 at 12:13

    Full of emotions !!!

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  6. Unknown11 October 2012 at 16:17

    Brief, yet so much power. Especially love the last line.

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    1. Anupam Patra11 October 2012 at 21:05

      Thanks Damayanti. And welcome to 'reflections'

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  7. Anonymous11 October 2012 at 22:24

    awesomelyyy amazinggggg ....:) :)

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  8. Sri Valli12 October 2012 at 02:46

    Defined the meaning of being 'Committed' in very few words!! Lovely!

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  9. Anupam Patra12 October 2012 at 06:18

    Thanks Vinay

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  10. odyzz12 October 2012 at 06:42

    its serene and strong ...liked it


    If you have time I would like to have your feed back on
    http://odizzey.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/an-untold-story/

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  11. Unknown12 October 2012 at 07:03

    Subtle yet so powerful depiction of the most sacred bond between two souls!

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  12. Akash Satyawali12 October 2012 at 08:50

    Hi Anupam, it is quite evident that this piece as always is amazing. I had a request to make, i wanted to add you to Facebook, so if you please. Would also be glad to follow you on Twitter. Just that all the Anupam`s that i came across on social media are not you, so if you could look into it.

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    1. Anupam Patra12 October 2012 at 22:43

      Hi Akash,

      As much as it delights and thrill me to read your profound words of appreciation, it equally pains me to inform you that I'm no more on FB. Though I am on Twitter, I was coerced to create an account there by my cousin. It lies unused and dormant. So my friend it seems that, atleast for the time being, you have to make do with reading my blog, I mean by becoming a member of 'reflections'. Would really appreciate that.

      Thanks again Akash

      Regards,

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  13. Sangrywords12 October 2012 at 20:01

    Aunpam - 4 lines and but you have brilliantly captured the essence of committment !!

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  14. Jannet Loves to Experiment12 October 2012 at 23:02

    No better way to describe it. Everything is captured in those 4 lines..

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  15. A Creative Mind13 October 2012 at 03:33

    Good thought..I myself write a bit when some emotion starts to grow deep inside..
    Just a thought, i would've written 'bliss' not 'blisses' :)

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    1. Anupam Patra13 October 2012 at 04:42

      I wrote that out of purpose.

      Thanks for reading

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  16. magiceye13 October 2012 at 04:47

    Way to go!!

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  17. Megha13 October 2012 at 05:03

    I enjoyed reading your work, and I feel the last line was the most powerful one :)

    P.S. I am glad to have blog-hopped and visited your Blog :)

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    1. Anupam Patra13 October 2012 at 08:25

      Thank You Megha for your kind words of admiration. I heartily welcome you to 'reflections'.

      Cheers for blog hoppin'

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  18. Uppal13 October 2012 at 08:07

    Few lines, deep semantics.

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  19. Minimalism -inspiring simplicity.13 October 2012 at 08:43

    Very well said!

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  20. Palak Dua13 October 2012 at 11:09

    it took you 4 lines to define da beauty of Love!! n most of all the word commitment,somthing dat gives love a meaning :) as olws ur wrds r deep enough to make me read it again n again :)

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    1. Anupam Patra13 October 2012 at 19:54

      Thank You Palak. Your admiration is always encouraging

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  21. Anonymous14 October 2012 at 01:18

    Sounds like a few people I know.

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  22. D.Nambiar14 October 2012 at 20:30

    Wow! those four lines say it all.
    Good one, Anupam.

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  23. Nirvana14 October 2012 at 21:38

    Beautiful!

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  24. Madhavi Abishek14 October 2012 at 21:48

    All I could say is WOW!!! few lines but intense meaning...

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    1. Anupam Patra14 October 2012 at 22:07

      Thanks for your generous admiration, Madhavi

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  25. Jayashree Srivatsan15 October 2012 at 08:05

    your short poems are getting more and more powerful :)

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  26. Ashitha15 October 2012 at 12:06

    I missed reading this. Lately, yet enjoyed. As everybody told above, your short poems are awesome. I am loving your choice of words..Keep it up :)

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    1. Anupam Patra15 October 2012 at 21:05

      Thank You Ashitha & welcome back. Hope you're doing good.

      And congratulations on your blog's first anniversary.

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  27. Anupam Patra15 October 2012 at 21:06

    Thank You Pradeeta

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  28. Unknown15 October 2012 at 21:28

    such deep thoughts in so few words, you are amazing

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  29. Writefully Yours18 October 2012 at 06:11

    very apt!

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  30. RehyaBond6 December 2012 at 10:05

    It just dawned upon me how all ur poems are controversial.
    It's like you can never find complete happiness/satisfaction in anything.

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  31. Anonymous14 September 2013 at 07:10

    nicee! have come across this post thrice till now..finally read it. beautiful :)

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  32. Maumita Bhattacharya2 September 2014 at 01:20

    True, words can say a lot, that is what this did. Beautifully written :)

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  33. Jyotika22 November 2016 at 17:00

    Sometimes you don't need more words to elaborate your feelings. That's truly reflected in your expression here. :)

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