Stop halt hold wait Pause those thoughts, I said Clear command disobeyed What's with the head ? A ruckus and bliss it holds Per its whims these are sold Me being its master Rendered slave to its fold
Whoa! That was brilliant Anupam. There is a story that I read about Mahabharatha where Yudhishtira answers the question 'Whats faster than the fastest of the horses?' 'The human mind'
Beautiful lines ... your words portray a strong picture !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks GS
DeleteI too agree with GS ..portrayal of a strong picture through your words..
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading dear!!!
Deletesuperb!It speaks many things...
ReplyDeleteThanks Jasmin
DeleteNice lines :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Naddy
DeleteWhoa! That was brilliant Anupam. There is a story that I read about Mahabharatha where Yudhishtira answers the question 'Whats faster than the fastest of the horses?' 'The human mind'
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is. Very aptly referred
DeleteThanks for reading Jayashree
This comment has been removed by the author.
DeleteIndeed we dnt know whatz with this head !!!
ReplyDeleteSomething very aptly described !!!
Happy Blogging !!!
Thanks for reading, Ankit
DeleteGripping thought. Well portrayed.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sh@s
DeleteWah! This was 'Ekdum Kadak'!
ReplyDeleteif we can become real master..
ReplyDeleteLife is SET :)
Lol.. lovely :)
ReplyDelete