'How is it' I asked
'Can I live after death ?'
Smirked He and said
'Not in all your earned wealth'
The choice is your's lad
From this day onward
What you do and what you sow
That's how in memories you'll grow
Your riches be sans worth
Your powers be frail than dirt
Your face be forgotten quick
Your remembrance be no sweet
Unless you choose to be more
Than just a life full of chore
Unless you see through your core
Than just whiling away 'a bore'
Choose a path that alters
The days of your's and others
Break free from the mundane cage
Embark upon an inspiring voyage
Show the world the light it seeks
Rescue 'em from deceitful tricks
A message you must yourself become
Not bow down to the dissenting some
Only when you've touched lives
Only when you've made great strides
In changing 'worse' to 'better'
Showering love, you go wherever
When you've burnt on the altar
Of sacrifice and braved life's war
When you've given back to all
Hope in the midst of a bleak fall,
Will you be worthy of a memory
Hailed in pages of history's glory
Then time too will find you mighty
Needless to say, you'll achieve immortality
'Can I live after death ?'
Smirked He and said
'Not in all your earned wealth'
The choice is your's lad
From this day onward
What you do and what you sow
That's how in memories you'll grow
Your riches be sans worth
Your powers be frail than dirt
Your face be forgotten quick
Your remembrance be no sweet
Unless you choose to be more
Than just a life full of chore
Unless you see through your core
Than just whiling away 'a bore'
Choose a path that alters
The days of your's and others
Break free from the mundane cage
Embark upon an inspiring voyage
Show the world the light it seeks
Rescue 'em from deceitful tricks
A message you must yourself become
Not bow down to the dissenting some
Only when you've touched lives
Only when you've made great strides
In changing 'worse' to 'better'
Showering love, you go wherever
When you've burnt on the altar
Of sacrifice and braved life's war
When you've given back to all
Hope in the midst of a bleak fall,
Will you be worthy of a memory
Hailed in pages of history's glory
Then time too will find you mighty
Needless to say, you'll achieve immortality
Wah... I'm awestruck..
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Rehya
DeleteTrue,immortality comes by the nature of your deeds and not by the beauty of the skin.
ReplyDeletenicely written.
---Gunjan Sinha
Absolutely true Gunjan.
DeleteThanks
So rhythmic n meaningful..
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind appreciation, Ranita
DeleteA very beautiful lesson....loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading
DeleteWow!! You rock buddy ! :D
ReplyDelete"'cuz of the love of my dear readers"
DeleteThanks Jayashree
Amazing poetry!
ReplyDeleteThanks Prerna
DeleteSuperb Poetry.... !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Raj
DeleteGood one, Anupam!
ReplyDeleteGrow so big through your deeds that you become visible beyond this life. Excellent thought.
Absolutely.
DeleteThanks Jayadev, for your kind appreciation.
so very true !
ReplyDeleteThanks
Deletesuperb ,awesome is the word :) :)
ReplyDeletereally amazing
Thank You Vinisha for your kind words
DeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDelete"Your riches be sans worth
Your powers be frail than dirt
Your face be forgotten quick
Your remembrance be no sweet..." ---The Truth, The Whole Truth, and Nothing But The Truth...
Thanks Panchali for the emphatic reiteration. I'm taking it as your kind appreciation.
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ReplyDeleteWe all die. The goal isn't to live forever, the goal is to create something that will
ReplyDeleteExactly. Thanks for reading.
DeleteWill you be worthy of a memory?
ReplyDeleteWell that single line made me think a lot. Am just one of those millions.....
Thanks for reading. I'm glad that it touched you.
DeleteAmazing.
ReplyDeleteThanks
Deletenicely done!
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