For
the hearts I broke
My heart lies crushed
For those tears I never wiped
Mine haven't been heeded
For
the pleas I didn’t hear
My
prayers never reached an ear
For the love I didn't give
I found & lost mine
The tear couplet is heart wrenching. Short and beautiful.
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DeleteWow.........simple yet profound
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Deletelovely lines
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DeleteVery well expressed and written ...
ReplyDeletethere is a sufi saying that everything comes back to you!!!
ReplyDeleteI know.
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short, simple and beautiful poem... loved it...
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Deletebeautifull.... :)
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Deletebeautiful lines..loved the closure..what goes around comes around..:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Arathi
DeleteBeautiful.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Roohi
DeleteI love the language that you use in your poems...I am sure everyone in this world can resonate with at least one of the couplets...
ReplyDeleteEvened was written for the realization one wakes up into in pain. In his own pain one often realizes the anguish he might have caused to others and shut his eyes to. It is written for the realization that certain things happen in life not for what one thinks they do but for a higher purpose. It is in such realization that the one suffering, finds true meaning and solace and the ability to welcome that pain as part of the purging and endures it. So that he can resume from where he had diverted himself wrongly before anything began.
DeleteI am glad Vidya that you could find a purpose to my language and the verses.
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ReplyDeleteThat's a beautiful Poem Anupam... :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Priyashi.
DeleteWhat goes around, comes around. The concept was put in a brief but gripping manner. It makes people think twice. I read it twice. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ragini
Deleteshort and sweet. love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Siddeshwar
DeletePoignant. There is a lot of pain inside.
ReplyDeleteThank you Abhijit ji for reading.
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