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Sunday 3 August 2014

Evened



For the hearts I broke                      
My heart lies crushed

For those tears I never wiped
Mine haven't been heeded

For the pleas I didn’t hear
My prayers never reached an ear

For the love I didn't give
I found & lost mine



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28 comments:

  1. Saru Singhal3 August 2014 at 07:00

    The tear couplet is heart wrenching. Short and beautiful.

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2014 at 07:02

    Wow.........simple yet profound

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  3. Nima Das3 August 2014 at 07:35

    lovely lines

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  4. lopa3 August 2014 at 08:27

    Very well expressed and written ...

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  5. i b arora3 August 2014 at 20:08

    there is a sufi saying that everything comes back to you!!!

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  6. Ashish Kumar3 August 2014 at 21:10

    short, simple and beautiful poem... loved it...

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  7. Unknown4 August 2014 at 00:13

    beautifull.... :)



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  8. Arathi Harihar4 August 2014 at 00:32

    beautiful lines..loved the closure..what goes around comes around..:)

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  9. Roohi Bhatnagar4 August 2014 at 01:20

    Beautiful.. :)

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  10. Unknown4 August 2014 at 19:53

    I love the language that you use in your poems...I am sure everyone in this world can resonate with at least one of the couplets...

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    1. Anupam Patra4 August 2014 at 20:52

      Evened was written for the realization one wakes up into in pain. In his own pain one often realizes the anguish he might have caused to others and shut his eyes to. It is written for the realization that certain things happen in life not for what one thinks they do but for a higher purpose. It is in such realization that the one suffering, finds true meaning and solace and the ability to welcome that pain as part of the purging and endures it. So that he can resume from where he had diverted himself wrongly before anything began.

      I am glad Vidya that you could find a purpose to my language and the verses.

      Thank You

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  11. Anupam Patra4 August 2014 at 20:52

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  12. Priyashi4 August 2014 at 20:58

    That's a beautiful Poem Anupam... :)

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  13. Anonymous6 August 2014 at 03:09

    What goes around, comes around. The concept was put in a brief but gripping manner. It makes people think twice. I read it twice. :)

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  14. siddeshwar8 August 2014 at 12:07

    short and sweet. love it!

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  15. Abhijit Ray24 August 2014 at 00:28

    Poignant. There is a lot of pain inside.

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