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Tuesday, 18 March 2014

My Dear Beloved ,,














They say to find heaven I' ve to die                                        
But my heaven in your embrace and love doth lie
And if there be indeed a heaven beyond life and death

I seek it not since your love is my heaven before parting breathe
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  1. Anupam Patra27 March 2014 at 06:58

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  2. Rajat Bansal13 August 2014 at 00:38

    Nice

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  3. Anonymous13 August 2014 at 00:42

    Beautiful heartfelt lines

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  4. Anonymous13 August 2014 at 22:35

    'Your love is my heaven'. Lovely Anupam. I'm not as good as you when it comes to thoughts & writing. But if I were you, I would have omitted the 'before parting breathe' part. :)

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    1. Anupam Patra13 August 2014 at 23:55

      You know why I wrote those words Ranjini, cuz her love is already my heaven before death (parting breathe)..i don't have to wait to die to find heaven.

      Thanks Ranjini for your continued encouragement

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  5. Datta Ghosh14 August 2014 at 00:11

    In your embrace and love doth lie;....classic English at its modern best!!

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