They left the windows, pulled each other down to the tiled floor, faintly aware of the vague reflections in it, of their obsessive longings. He buried his face in her neck shouting muted pleas to let him flow, travelling bit by bit, by his lips, his hands searching urgently for a spot to cusp. She could connect to his virgin pining, an indescribable yet throbbing urge that he painfully veiled at all times. The realization turned her on, far beyond her own power. She knew not from where she drew the strength to pin him down, and settle on him. He was stunned with pleasure, born of the unadmitted masculine joy of giving in to his consort's domination. They had long lost the satin sheet. The distant flashes of Zeus's bolt, tantalizingly revealed their contours, the knowledge of which only their lips and fingers had relished. He zealously braved himself deep into the mystic ends of her guarded cavern, unvisited, undared and unknown to anyone. He cherished the passing of seconds & she the minutes. She was not ready yet, to leave him. She whispered in his ears the maiden promise of being with him in happiness & sadness alike. She wasn't going to let him visit alone the corridors of ecstasy. He obliged her wishes by clinging tightly, breaking barriers, confines and meaningless frontiers as he did what she loved, again and again, till what seemed as an eternity. She pulled him closer exhibiting an ostensible urgency, wanting him to fill her more & more, gesturing a desire of indivisibly melting into each other, but there was only so much that he could occupy, those undefined limits of invasion by invitation. She smelt like orchids, the edges of her body dimly illuminated by the dark. He murmured her name and how much he yearned for her in every moment of his life & she sighed back timeless pledges of devotion. She dug her fingers in his toiling back, the pain failing to penetrate beyond his skin. His body was now a phantom's garb, ready to fade in the bliss that consumed his soul.
Then in an immortal instance arrived at, in those exact seconds by both, they attained what they had wanted. Their bodies rising and falling in unison and souls intertwined inseparably, they kept their promise of being by each other in times of joy. He stared at her soul, gleaming in the moist of her eyes. She touched his chest caging his racing heart. Nothing existed nowhere. She cusped her hands around his ears steadying his panting face and planted her lips on his. He slowly receded from her remarkable softness and rested his head on her chest. Neither moved an inch, letting intimacies stay the way they were. He closed his eyes to the lullaby of her steady heartbeats, his breathing transforming gradually into a more definitive intake of air. He was in need of it. She moved her fingers on his head, caressing him and reminding herself of how much she needed him. The restless skies had, it seemed, moved closer to their window. Incessant lightning followed the torrent that lashed against the transparent glasses. She glared at the far away endless string of street lamps that sincerely lighted up the desolate freeway, musing over nothing in particular, just the figments of bygone moments, persuading a fancy of the future. Hours later, he woke up to the faint beep of his watch. Not wanting to leave, he began treading out of the apartment, while she watched helplessly pretending to be dreaming.
very vibrant imagery u have created in this post..
ReplyDeletean awesome read :)
Thanks Jyoti. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteWhoa..Impeccable narration, Anupam...sensuous n absorbing read:)
ReplyDeleteThank You 'Panchalibolchi'.
DeleteVery interesting!
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
DeleteEvery new read exposes a different facet of your creativity, Anupam! Kudos.
ReplyDeleteI'm assuming from your generous review that you liked "Insatiable". If that is so then I'm truly glad that a mighty talented writer as yourself liked my maiden attempt at depicting something like this.
DeleteThanks Suresh ji, very much.
Very different Anupam and a good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jayashree
DeleteI am new to blogging and your post has inspired me.Nice work Anupam.
ReplyDeleteHey Diana, good you got into blogging. I'm not that old too. Started two months prior to you.
DeleteThanks for your appreciation. I'm glad you liked the read.
This was so pure and BEAUTIFUL. The love depicted here is so sacred. This is brilliant work my friend and I won't be surprised to see your work reach out to a larger audience. Brilliant work again.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rohit, for your generous appreciation. I'm encouraged by your gesture.
DeleteThanks again.
Well-crafted and awesome work.Gud luck !
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashitha !!!
Deletea sensational one really, there is only attraction and no feelings or relation......like an one-night stand......... beautifully narrated.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rohan for reading "Insatiable" and appreciating it.
DeleteA one night stand is not exactly what I've depicted here, though I agree that it sounds like one, because I've only talked about the sensuous interaction between the characters. I was experimenting with my abilities to write something like this for the first time. Hence I deliberately didn't write much about relations & commitment & similar things.
Thanks for reading anyways Rohan !!!
The visual imagery on this one is amazing due to attention to detail. Great work and a very gripping read!
ReplyDeleteThanks for noticing Ankita. That was tremendously encouraging.
DeleteThanks again
An excellent treat for the readers with a perfect blend of sensuality and emotion..
ReplyDeleteThanks for those lovely words of appreciation, Ranita.
Deletegreat post, loved ure narrative style and gripping flow
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Thanks SJ. I'm delighted by your response.
Deletewow...just simply wow..you are way vivid actually :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you read this
Deletehad to :D
Deletejust wow.. turned on !
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Aman.
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