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Monday 11 July 2016

Amaranthine





I love you when your scarlet lips pray                       
And your feather feet turn the fate of my way,
I love you when you carry the sky in your eyes
And bind the oceans in seraphic smile,
You're the moonlit verse which heavens wear
An ageless song that clouds shower.
I love you for amaranthine is your loveliness
Your arms a fragile haven for my slowing self
I love you when you kneel with kindness
And touch my barren soul's emptiness.







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29 comments:

  1. Uppal13 July 2016 at 06:20

    Love the last two lines.Great imagery!

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  2. Pranju chakrapani13 July 2016 at 08:41

    There is a certain color to your poem. May be due to some of those beautiful words. And then comes your verses. A wonderful blend of color and love.

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  3. Tomichan Matheikal13 July 2016 at 09:03

    Love is the only thing that can fill the emptiness meaningfully.

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    1. Anupam Patra13 July 2016 at 09:08

      Believe me Tomichan, it has. Undetachably.

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  4. umashankar13 July 2016 at 09:06

    The closing notes seal the tenderness and desire superbly.

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    1. Anupam Patra13 July 2016 at 09:12

      If you say this, then she has won. What are my words if not a heartfelt shot at reflecting her care, my words a humble seeker of her promises. Thank you Umaji.

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  5. lopa13 July 2016 at 12:31

    The love expressed in your poems is divine... The words that express this love will fill a desire in any girl to feel and experience it for once in her life ... But when you go deep into the poem through each and every line , it gives a sense of joy to love and be loved and at the same time when you go deep through the lines of the poem you can feel a sore point that is being described through words by the writer through this poem !!

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    1. Anupam Patra13 July 2016 at 19:53

      Hi Lopa,

      Perhaps it is hard to separate the melancholy for the poet from the love he feels for her. Thank you so much for dropping by. It's always great to hear from you.

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  6. Hema13 July 2016 at 23:06

    Anupam, this blew my mind. There is such beauty and tenderness. The last two lines take the cake. I love your choice of words..Amaranthine might just be my new favorite word. Well done!

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    1. Anupam Patra13 July 2016 at 23:45

      Thank you so much for the gracious words Hema. In all fairness the credit for discovery of the word Amaranthine must go to someone else. Thank you so much once again.

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  7. Anupam Patra14 July 2016 at 00:41

    Thanks Rajeev

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  8. Sashikanta14 July 2016 at 02:53

    Superb! You are a master in potryaing the ethereal quality of love that actualy encompasses every living being but manifested and articulated the best in humans. Keep writing!

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    1. Anupam Patra14 July 2016 at 03:06

      This means a lot coming from you Sir. Thank you.

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  9. Anita Sabat14 July 2016 at 07:07

    Nice words :)

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  10. Oriyarasoi14 July 2016 at 09:13

    Most beautiful lines :) !! Love , tenderness and warmth conveyed in equal measure

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    1. Anupam Patra14 July 2016 at 09:28

      Thank you Sweta. Your words colour the lines with even greater beauty.

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  11. Santwona14 July 2016 at 20:59

    Lots of emotions keep brimming, in everything you write. Nice way of pouring out your heart to the world! It always touches a chord. :)

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    1. Anupam Patra14 July 2016 at 21:03

      Hey Mithi, thanks for all the lovely words. They are even lovelier than mine😊

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  12. Maniparna15 July 2016 at 23:59

    The whole poem is like a picture...especially loved the last two lines.... :-)

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    1. Anupam Patra16 July 2016 at 01:16

      Thank you Maniparna. It's good to hear from you.

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  13. Vaisakhi16 July 2016 at 07:54

    Always loved you poems...sorry for missing out on so many...feels good to be back on this blog.
    Loved the poem :)

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    1. Anupam Patra16 July 2016 at 09:34

      Hey Vaisakhi.

      I was myself away for a long time. Thanks for returning to Reflections. Your appreciation means a lot.

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  14. Abhijit Ray16 July 2016 at 21:30

    Loved it. Thank you.

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  15. ilakshee18 July 2016 at 03:10

    Reading the words was like a slowing down of a fast life, to savour the moments they elicit. There is a tenderness in the surrender to love.

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    1. Anupam Patra18 July 2016 at 03:34

      Thank you Ilakshee for your generous appreciation.

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  16. Amrita10 September 2016 at 23:12

    Lovely...

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