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Thursday, 12 September 2013

Disturbing Whispers




Farewell sunrise                                     
Adieu sunset
Though you shaln't plead
Am no more drawn to your velvet

I care no more for
All your silver,
The gold's glitter,
Nor the beats of hearts' shiver

Hold your chords
Whisper not aloud
Decades and countless
Futile lullabies later, 

Lastly found dreams
Worth sleeping for






Photo credit: Danish Siddiqui / Reuters
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26 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 September 2013 at 10:39

    a sensitively heart touching poem. strikes the chord intensely.

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  2. Sahithya Sridhar14 September 2013 at 04:07

    The poem starts with a very positive and inspirational line,..!:)

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  3. Rajesh14 September 2013 at 07:09

    Well writte, - touching!

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  4. Tomichan Matheikal14 September 2013 at 07:23

    Finding dreams worth living for?

    Enjoyed the lines.

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    1. Anupam Patra14 September 2013 at 19:27

      No 'sleeping for'. There was no point in living in a world of unfulfilled dreams

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  5. CYNOSURE14 September 2013 at 09:05

    You made me think over it for a long time...
    beautifully penned down...I'm literally speechless :O

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  6. Jayashree Srivatsan14 September 2013 at 09:06

    The poem is lovely but I am intrigued by the picture of the girl and the chalk scribblings around her

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    1. Anupam Patra14 September 2013 at 19:28

      Those chalk drawings are of homes she dreamt living inside someday.

      Thanks for reading Jayashree

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    2. Anupam Patra14 September 2013 at 19:29

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  7. kalpana solsi14 September 2013 at 09:45

    The last two lines are so powerful. Lovely poem.

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  8. Anonymous14 September 2013 at 21:24

    Amazing poem. Fascinated. :)

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  9. Anonymous15 September 2013 at 20:30

    Nice Poem Anupam the last words will be a keepsake > lastly found dreams worth sleeping for :)

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  10. Jyoti Mishra16 September 2013 at 05:01

    found dreams worth sleeping for

    I missed your posts.. we all have our own ghosts to conquer upon.

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  11. Sri Valli18 September 2013 at 03:17

    Touching poem Anupam!

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  12. Ravichandran M18 September 2013 at 05:35

    Sensitive poem! Nice!

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  13. Ankita 9 November 2013 at 01:23

    Gawd! u write so well!

    loved the depth!

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