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Thursday, 26 July 2012

Listen Beautiful.......





What's in a pair of rosy lips, what's in a mesmeric voice
What's in the softness of hands that guides my choice
What's in a satin skin on which my fingers slide
What matters is how long we stick to each other's side;


What's a personification of such splendour
If that comes without a benevolent tenor.
What if, for all eyes you are the cynosure,
But for no one you wait at the door


They may call you gorgeous and offer you riches
They may sigh when you glance and ignore your glitches
What's in so much adulation and maddening cheers
If when you cry there's no one to catch your tears


What's in a lovely pair of eyes, what's in the beauty
What's in long braided hair and an angelic deity
All that matters my lady and all you must care,
Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair







56 comments:

  1. Beauty is Skin Deep expressed so beautifully Anupam....Lovely!

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  2. inner beauty is true beauty..beautifully penned..

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  3. Clap..! Clap..! Clap..! Well said and well rhymed.
    Also, beauty lies in the eye of the beholder :)

    PS: You a lawyer?
    You present your case like a pro.

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    1. I second you, Ghazala! :) Anupam, the message is clear and true. Beautifully written! :)

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    2. @ Ghazala Thanks for your kind appreciation. I'm not a lawyer. In the legal field though.
      Quite an observation, I must say.

      @ Vaishali Thanks for your encouragement.

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  4. Lovely poem ... really beautiful !!!

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  6. A must read for everyone.Beauty is skin deep.Beautiful.

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  7. All that matters my lady and all you must care,
    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair

    So true !

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  8. Lovely poem! Like the satin soothes the soul :)
    Here is a poetry competition, if you blv in such things, do participate:http://roughebook.blogspot.in/2012/07/rayaprol-poetry-contest.html

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  9. The overall tone is elegant--so beautifully depicted!The last two lines say it all...beautiful:)

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  10. Beautifully put together, Anupam.

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  11. So many questions symbolic and real answered in the last two lines irrevocably!

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    1. That's right Umashankar ji. Thanks for your kind words & continued encouragement.

      Delighted !!!

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  12. Ahh, the perfect description of the perfect partner Anupam. Nicely articulated :)
    Have you been able to find such a person with similar characteristics? :)

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    1. Time will tell bro, time will tel. Fingers crossed though.

      Thanks for reading

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  13. Beautifully written ! You have been tagged for an Liebster Award - check the link http://www.vaishu-soulcurry.blogspot.in/2012/07/my-first-blog-award.html

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    1. Thanks for the honour Vaishali !!!!

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  14. Anupam, I really admire the way you put things straight from heart to pen...really great reading stuff...

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    1. Thanks a ton Menaka for your kind words of appreciation

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  15. true beauty comes from within ... loved the poem ...so b'fully expressed !

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  16. excellent post, Anupam. glad i stopped by!!!

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    1. Thanks Mohana for your kind words.

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  17. Every word is true...liked it..beautifully expressed.

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  18. elegance and beauty dripping from the poem. great work.

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    1. Thanks for your kind appreciation, Harshal

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  19. Beautiful :)
    Loved reading..

    All that matters my lady and all you must care,
    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair

    Really really glad to read these words by a guy :) awesome!

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    1. Thanks Sonia for dropping by and encouraging me with your kind words of admiration.

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    1. Thanks Satish, for your encouragement.

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  21. Such a lovely poem...its so deep and adorable. Amazing piece of work! Really nice!

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    1. Thanks Neeraj for showering your kind words.

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  22. beautifully written.really nice!!

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  23. What's in so much adulation and maddening cheers
    If when you cry there's no one to catch your tears


    ll that matters my lady and all you must care,
    Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair


    AWESOME
    and
    TRUE
    :)

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    1. Thanks Jagriti.It's good to see that, what I wrote for women is appreciated by them. Thanks for your support.

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  24. Is how true is your heart and how your spirit's fair.

    Very Nice sirji.

    Markand Dave.

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