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Thursday, 11 October 2012

Committed...







Entwined by fate
together by choice
they seek bliss
in million miseries

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    1. Thank You Jasmin for your continued encouragement

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  2. Lots of sentiments in just a few words….Amazing piece :)

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    1. Thanks Akanksha. Your appreciation delighted me

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  3. Brief, yet so much power. Especially love the last line.

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    1. Thanks Damayanti. And welcome to 'reflections'

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  4. awesomelyyy amazinggggg ....:) :)

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  5. Defined the meaning of being 'Committed' in very few words!! Lovely!

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  6. its serene and strong ...liked it


    If you have time I would like to have your feed back on
    http://odizzey.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/an-untold-story/

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  7. Subtle yet so powerful depiction of the most sacred bond between two souls!

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  8. Hi Anupam, it is quite evident that this piece as always is amazing. I had a request to make, i wanted to add you to Facebook, so if you please. Would also be glad to follow you on Twitter. Just that all the Anupam`s that i came across on social media are not you, so if you could look into it.

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    1. Hi Akash,

      As much as it delights and thrill me to read your profound words of appreciation, it equally pains me to inform you that I'm no more on FB. Though I am on Twitter, I was coerced to create an account there by my cousin. It lies unused and dormant. So my friend it seems that, atleast for the time being, you have to make do with reading my blog, I mean by becoming a member of 'reflections'. Would really appreciate that.

      Thanks again Akash

      Regards,

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  9. Aunpam - 4 lines and but you have brilliantly captured the essence of committment !!

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  10. No better way to describe it. Everything is captured in those 4 lines..

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  11. Good thought..I myself write a bit when some emotion starts to grow deep inside..
    Just a thought, i would've written 'bliss' not 'blisses' :)

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    1. I wrote that out of purpose.

      Thanks for reading

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  12. I enjoyed reading your work, and I feel the last line was the most powerful one :)

    P.S. I am glad to have blog-hopped and visited your Blog :)

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    1. Thank You Megha for your kind words of admiration. I heartily welcome you to 'reflections'.

      Cheers for blog hoppin'

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    1. Thank You Ma'm. Welcome to 'reflections'

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    1. Thanks Aneesha for visiting 'reflections'

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  15. it took you 4 lines to define da beauty of Love!! n most of all the word commitment,somthing dat gives love a meaning :) as olws ur wrds r deep enough to make me read it again n again :)

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    1. Thank You Palak. Your admiration is always encouraging

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  16. Sounds like a few people I know.

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  17. Wow! those four lines say it all.
    Good one, Anupam.

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  18. All I could say is WOW!!! few lines but intense meaning...

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    1. Thanks for your generous admiration, Madhavi

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  19. your short poems are getting more and more powerful :)

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  20. I missed reading this. Lately, yet enjoyed. As everybody told above, your short poems are awesome. I am loving your choice of words..Keep it up :)

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    1. Thank You Ashitha & welcome back. Hope you're doing good.

      And congratulations on your blog's first anniversary.

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  21. such deep thoughts in so few words, you are amazing

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  22. It just dawned upon me how all ur poems are controversial.
    It's like you can never find complete happiness/satisfaction in anything.

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  23. nicee! have come across this post thrice till now..finally read it. beautiful :)

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  24. True, words can say a lot, that is what this did. Beautifully written :)

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  25. Sometimes you don't need more words to elaborate your feelings. That's truly reflected in your expression here. :)

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