The tear couplet is heart wrenching. Short and beautiful.
Thank You Saru
Wow.........simple yet profound
Very well expressed and written ...
there is a sufi saying that everything comes back to you!!!
I know.Thanks for reading.
short, simple and beautiful poem... loved it...
beautiful lines..loved the closure..what goes around comes around..:)
Thank You Arathi
Thank You Roohi
I love the language that you use in your poems...I am sure everyone in this world can resonate with at least one of the couplets...
Evened was written for the realization one wakes up into in pain. In his own pain one often realizes the anguish he might have caused to others and shut his eyes to. It is written for the realization that certain things happen in life not for what one thinks they do but for a higher purpose. It is in such realization that the one suffering, finds true meaning and solace and the ability to welcome that pain as part of the purging and endures it. So that he can resume from where he had diverted himself wrongly before anything began.I am glad Vidya that you could find a purpose to my language and the verses.Thank You
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That's a beautiful Poem Anupam... :)
Thank You Priyashi.
What goes around, comes around. The concept was put in a brief but gripping manner. It makes people think twice. I read it twice. :)
Thank You Ragini
short and sweet. love it!
Poignant. There is a lot of pain inside.
Thank you Abhijit ji for reading.