tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post403895628731596456..comments2023-10-25T05:05:00.272-07:00Comments on Reflections: The FallenAnupam Patrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comBlogger55125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-85821977853930481202012-11-27T09:24:42.464-08:002012-11-27T09:24:42.464-08:00Amazing poem, Anupam! I love how this story will a...Amazing poem, Anupam! I love how this story will always be in my heart from now on. Thanks for sharing!GoddessChhavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13154853993554108461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-68380592131409429462012-09-18T23:24:17.523-07:002012-09-18T23:24:17.523-07:00Thanks for your words of appreciation. I'm del...Thanks for your words of appreciation. I'm delighted by 'em.<br /><br />Keep visiting Pratik.Anupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-41548689760287925032012-09-18T22:38:39.544-07:002012-09-18T22:38:39.544-07:00nicely written Anupam. the end glorifies ur poem. ...nicely written Anupam. the end glorifies ur poem. I see you cud have also ended it on a gloomy note.. generally many poems now do.. but the end demystified the gloom..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00811170631570451388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-36331238514596387492012-09-12T23:08:23.680-07:002012-09-12T23:08:23.680-07:00Thanks Surabhi. Keep visiting often.Thanks Surabhi. Keep visiting often.Anupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-21029798064983913212012-09-12T23:03:48.039-07:002012-09-12T23:03:48.039-07:00Hi Anupam, this is probably my first read on your ...Hi Anupam, this is probably my first read on your blog and the first thing I read, I loved it. Wonderfully well written. I could actually visualize it and thats the beauty of good writing. Surabhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03676668904317015815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-21017481906423066202012-09-12T21:13:13.073-07:002012-09-12T21:13:13.073-07:00I'm touched by your generous gesture Ketan.
Th...I'm touched by your generous gesture Ketan.<br />ThanksAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-52908461669594706392012-09-12T21:11:45.605-07:002012-09-12T21:11:45.605-07:00Thanks AjeethThanks AjeethAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-44915618243983852152012-09-12T20:31:56.102-07:002012-09-12T20:31:56.102-07:00When pen has so much to reveal... eyes actually ge...When pen has so much to reveal... eyes actually gets surprised to accept it.....<br />I loved the way poem has poured effect of liveliness in it...Caring Enemieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13210868594843203047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-45703439526353777812012-09-12T04:59:05.877-07:002012-09-12T04:59:05.877-07:00Well narrated, good job...Well narrated, good job...ajeethboazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11231579395096452438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-62952702684897429732012-09-12T00:50:56.238-07:002012-09-12T00:50:56.238-07:00Ah! lovely; especially the ending.Ah! lovely; especially the ending.D.Nambiarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14567504529129900396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-75267427968371627392012-09-11T21:57:57.375-07:002012-09-11T21:57:57.375-07:00Oh wow !!! It's like Fallen - Part II
Super w...Oh wow !!! It's like Fallen - Part II<br /><br />Super work dear. You've given a new meaning to the whole poem.<br /><br />Lovely poetry and some wonderful rhymingAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-59204636101226151282012-09-11T21:51:39.507-07:002012-09-11T21:51:39.507-07:00Nice one Anupam. Very glad to see that you are try...Nice one Anupam. Very glad to see that you are trying out various things in writing. It needs a stuff and a strong belief that you can. And you are. Thanks for sharing.<br />So the eagle from that day onwards<br />Was found next to the little bird.<br />And gave all that it ever had<br />To compensate and served as guard<br /><br />To that little mynah which was<br />Hurt unintentionally by it.<br />Without thinking twice, it was<br />The apt decision, that it saw fit.<br /><br />We may hurt someone without<br />A cause or need, accidentally.<br />If only we do regret about<br />And make amends, we get an ally.<br /><br />Life is a long process in which<br />You get some friends and foes.<br />More of first is what we wish,<br />Alas! Increasing is our woes.<br /><br />If we do not hurt others<br />Lesser in stature than us,<br />Chances are, we aren't hurt neither<br />By those who are stronger than us.aargeeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06981783649806278464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-42577288085610255452012-09-11T19:28:06.383-07:002012-09-11T19:28:06.383-07:00Thanks NikitaThanks NikitaAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-56741407782072323902012-09-11T12:18:20.795-07:002012-09-11T12:18:20.795-07:00amazing thoughts dear.........amazing thoughts dear.........NIKITAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15032927933941511183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-61150240982629878922012-09-11T09:25:30.659-07:002012-09-11T09:25:30.659-07:00Thanks for your appreciation, AnuThanks for your appreciation, AnuAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-24962023806363561282012-09-11T09:24:56.254-07:002012-09-11T09:24:56.254-07:00Thanks for reading VishnuThanks for reading VishnuAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-82895715390003774582012-09-11T09:24:26.520-07:002012-09-11T09:24:26.520-07:00Thanks ArchanaThanks ArchanaAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-5835048329964824712012-09-11T06:44:19.868-07:002012-09-11T06:44:19.868-07:00nice and heart touching poem....
loved it!!
anu nice and heart touching poem....<br />loved it!!<br /><br />anu ANULATA RAJ NAIRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386833556494189702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-16562177573899041672012-09-11T06:14:04.285-07:002012-09-11T06:14:04.285-07:00touching!!touching!!Vishnu Kelothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628629794042996358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-36299191767706625262012-09-11T05:04:43.898-07:002012-09-11T05:04:43.898-07:00well wriiten ... really liked it!!! good job!!
Ar...well wriiten ... really liked it!!! good job!! <br />Archana :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15267940322249287293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-6321847234214558382012-09-10T22:37:36.965-07:002012-09-10T22:37:36.965-07:00Thanks Deepa. I'm glad you liked the poem.
Yo...Thanks Deepa. I'm glad you liked the poem.<br /><br />You can check out a few short stories and poems that I've written from "Short Stories" & "Poetry" pages.Anupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-57316070505267637722012-09-10T22:32:45.575-07:002012-09-10T22:32:45.575-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-88047653856959203972012-09-10T22:14:43.445-07:002012-09-10T22:14:43.445-07:00Thanks for reading Indu jiThanks for reading Indu jiAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-30926129360534271652012-09-10T22:13:53.383-07:002012-09-10T22:13:53.383-07:00Thanks Satya for your generous words of appreciati...Thanks Satya for your generous words of appreciationAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6541136381262666757.post-77503031429530104332012-09-10T22:11:42.940-07:002012-09-10T22:11:42.940-07:00Thanks for your appreciation SangeetaThanks for your appreciation SangeetaAnupam Patrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00179237569294043987noreply@blogger.com